That's fine. Doomie can take "below the neck", as I believe she was the one who originally wrote it. As for the "going home" line, I might see if I can come up with something else (or if anyone else has an idea, feel free to send it along).
I just finished recording my track. I think I substituted it with "Ok, and pose aaaaaaand go" Otherwise it all came out fantastically. I'll have to go back in and record that Who's that Pokemon line, though.
Just finished listening to your first take. Really good, but I have some suggestions:
you forgot "No, you're thinking of Lucario"
get a little louder on the first reading of "read or die!"
The "forshadowing" line at 3:08 feels a bit rushed, if you could read through it a little slower.
Also need you a bit louder with the "Miss Deep's expression" line.
The word "anime" is a bit hard to make out at 8:13
Do the read of "you're mom" like you're dissing somebody; like "yo' mom!"
I need you to read the line at 17:46 exactly as it's written, and just a bit slower
I'd like to switch one line with you, if I could: 22:51 for 23:01.
a bit louder and more concerned with the line at 24:22 (and how it's written)
read the "psych, heil hitler" line like the nostalgia critic does at 3:05 of his You are not allowed to view links.
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(if you wanna do the german accent, that's cool; just don't read it too fast)
at 27:57, loudly take a deep breath (like you're gasping for air), and then make like you're carrying on the guy's "Nooooo!", having it get get fainter and fainter (like someone falling off a cliff). And don't have it tie into the second "read or die", end it just before that.
and put more emphasis on the "Read or Let Die" line at the very end.
I hope I'm not being overly critical. I really like the work you did, these are just little suggestions that I feel would really take it over the top (chances are everyone else will be getting notes like these too). As for the audio from the DVD, you can only really hear it whenever you aren't speaking, so I don't think it should be a problem. However, I would suggest in the future wearing earphones as you watch along to block out that kind of ambient noise.
And again, I wanna say that I think you did a fantastic job. You've got a great voice for this kind of thing, and I think it will really lend itself to future commentaries.
